Moments...
Solace beckons the heart to the whispers of nature.
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tranquil...breathtaking, poignant ellipses
between the raindrops of the heartbeat
and the silence within the self
the world pauses for one precious breath
the soul gasps in worshipful, sublime adoration
at the unforgettable beauty of an early morning sunrise
awakening in all of it's majesty---
or glorifies in the radiant colors of warmth within a sunset...
we marvel at the blush of lavender, peach and purple hues
the sky becomes an artist's canvas, overwhelming the senses...
the sun descends, transforming the horizon to darker shades of blues...
red, orange, yellow and pink vie for their places in the grand line-up
so marvelous are those moments...
...we forget to breathe...in the spaces in-between...a cessation of time
as nature flaunts its abundant beauty, flirting with our senses
knowing full well, it has our attention---
we stand in awe of the architect, the creator of such magnificence...
and we sigh...
WELL DONE!
Those moments when
the world awakens...and
The day begins!
Glorious.
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Novel Allen
You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.
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As your poem beautifully captures...the little painted, vivid moments of life are glorious...yet so unappreciated. True poetry, Novel.
beautiful poem and imagery.
Too good 👍 congratulations 🎉👏
Could really feel the calm and tranquility of your poem! It reminded me to take a moment to breath. Much deserved of top story!
I hate it when I miss the morning sun rise; it's such a delight each day, and each day offers a new magickal experience. Congratulations on your top story!
Glorious indeed and now captured with your words in tribute.
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Glorious is right! Excellent.
Omg this was stunning! My favourite line "the sky becomes an artist's canvas, overwhelming the senses..." Beautifully done! 💖✨
I had the exact thought that Randy did, such a magical beginning to a lovely sunlit day...or an overcast one. 🦋glorious still.
Oh wow, this was soooo magically beautiful! Loved your poem so much!
Beautiful indeed. Capturing these little wonders in our life-love it
Glorious indeed! What a way to begin the day.
Okay, that was absolutely beautiful. 🤩 Or perhaps I should say "glorious" - a fitting word for you poem. Very well written, Novel! Nicely done.
I shall quote your own words to tell you how I feel about this piece. "we stand in awe of the architect, the creator of such magnificence... and we sigh... WELL DONE!"
Cherish each lovely moment. Lovely poem, Novlet<3
Simply gorgeous! Go No! 🫶🏾🌸