In the land where mermaids dwell
There’s a story to tell
Of love and romance
Where nothing is taken to chance
A safe place where love meets
To decide if they want to hit the sheets
By swiping left or right
They can set a date for day or night
Anywhere on the map
All on a magical dating app
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Comments (11)
Nice! Aren't there stories about not living after sex with a mermaid? Or maybe it was a writer's story from here or medium?
Ah, modern love indeed! Love both the poem and the cool pic!
Oh wow, your cover pic is soooo cool! Loved that and your poem!
Haha, I loved this concept!! Incredible! 🌟💘
The last line killed me, Sharon! A dating app for the sea creatures can be something new and successful.
Nice work! Very creative! 💕
Poor unfortunate souls 🥹 ✨ great job, a nice addition to your story.
Beautiful poem ✍️♦️♦️♦️♦️
Plenty of Fish? lol
Oh, it's like the follow up! This is great, so the story goes on. This is a fun one. I wonder if she decides she chooses any of the candidates as you alluded to here.
Lol...love this and I clicked it double quick cos of the name haha. I am such an ass because as soon as I read the "hit the sheets" line, I thought, damn that's going to be messy! Well done, Sharon!