Melody's at Midnight
A Heartbreak Song
Hey, I thought I'd share this draft of a song chorus I wrote! Hope you enjoy!
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She was my everything
She was my saving grace
She was my lonely night
She was my happy place
I took her out to nowhere lying underneath the stars
Played her like a fiddle but it only broke her heart
No-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
You'll never know
Woah-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
Please let me go
No-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
She'll never know
Woah-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh
Please let me go
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A few comments said I should continue writing this song, here's a verse I wrote to go with it!
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She ain't even my ex, but we were smokin' together
You could smell the hot sex, and the dope on my sweater
Sending me a text, with the hope of whatever
But I couldn't go on, livin' broken together.
Still I hold her forever, Never letting her go
Her memory lives on, in the back of my soul
Hitting from the bong, and packing a bowl
Knowing it was wrong, now I'm back in control.
Still,
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Let me know what you think!
If you enjoyed this, Check out another song I wrote!
About the Creator
Dylan
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Feelings Never Die
It is Valentine's Day again, and it bought back memories that were over fifty years old. It bought me back to 1971, and I woke up and I knew my baby was due today. I was big and pregnant, and I felt like I was about to burst wide open. Imagine my surprise when the doctor told my I had a due date of February 14. I couldn't believe it, and since my baby was due today, I felt I could indulge myself a bit. I had gained a lot of weight, and chocolate was on the no-no list, but I had came to the end of this pregnancy, and I hoped it would be okay, after all I would deliver this baby today. So I walked across the street to the grocery story, and bought myself, a peppermint patty, covered in chocolate, my favorite. Me and my Valentine's baby would enjoy it together.
By Susan Payton2 days ago in Fiction
Comments (2)
Yes- write this!!!! Love it! Better yet, record it and add a link so we can hear you sing this awesomeness! I also want a link in your rap!
That has potential- hope you keep building the song from there!