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Frosted verse

By Esala GunathilakePublished about a year ago โ€ข 1 min read
Top Story - November 2024
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Almost at the very end of the fall

The softest downpour sprinkles

To those pacifying orange leaves

Dew globs have their plans

Cognitive they fall

To the same leaf, branch or blossom

Than to others

Select the best one for water vapours

To give kisses

Atmosphere Grandpa and Temperature Grandma

Design the suitable environ

Water vapours enfold

This is the birth

Of the first baby frost

Small but has pride

All the neighbours of nature

Visit the baby

Aliens called humans

Reveals the secret

And that is the breakthrough

It is WINTER, humans decide

That frost is a life-changer

Hi to lots of fun and long vacations

Families reunite not all but many

Sharing gifts and presents

Not even them

loving nature more than ever

The grown frost glimpses chuckles

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About the Creator

Esala Gunathilake

I am an enthusiastic writer who feel the sense of humanity. Thus, I can write stanzas, short stories, novels, articles and blogs as well. I am a blog contributor for the Ananda College Engineer's Ink student chapter website.

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  • Tales That Breathe at Night9 months ago

    Masterful yet soothing @Esala Gunathilake

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    Esala, this is artfully written! The line that drew me in the most was "Dew globs have their plans." It speaks to the sentience of all things. Deserving of recognition, this poem... congratulations!

  • P.A.Vinura Jayasankaabout a year ago

    Outstanding bro!

  • Stella Yan PhDabout a year ago

    The quiet arrival of Winter always inspires me!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Beautiful imagery.

  • Maxamed Sharifabout a year ago

    Just give 1 subscribe

  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    This is so simple yet so lovely to read. Congrats on your top story.

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Congrats on the TS!! ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    Great Esala!๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’—

  • Melanieabout a year ago

    Well crafted poem.

  • Qurat ul Ainabout a year ago

    Beautifully written !

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Beautiful, beautiful poem

  • Neethyabout a year ago

    Nice poem....congrats

  • Michelle Renee Kidwellabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem...

  • Karan w. about a year ago

    Very wonderfulโœจ๐Ÿ˜ Congratulations๐Ÿฅณ๐Ÿฅณ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽ‰

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Such a beautiful poem, Esala!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Great job, Esala. Congrats on the TS.

  • Muhammad Waseem about a year ago

    Masterpiece! One of the top stories! Congrats ๐ŸŽ‰

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Love your take on the beginning of frost. I love how you describe the nature scene. Excellent work.

  • verse voyagerabout a year ago

    Such a whimsical take on winterโ€™s arrival. Love how nature feels alive with characters like "baby frost" and the human connection at the end. Super creative......hope you find my latest piece relatable...check it out and let me know if you liked it

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