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Let It Flow

Surrender

By Brenda RamseyPublished about 19 hours ago 1 min read

When You have time, reason and rhyme

Sit by the sea and don't think of me

Think of yourself and your own health

Watch the waves while you feel inner caves

Of feelings and thoughts and complex rorts

Just watch them glide and slide

Across the terrian like clouds full of rain

Awaiting their release to attain peace

Like waves undulating towards the shore

You cant stop them in mid-roar

Just watch and feel. Witness and heal

Let them flow like rain and snow

Feelings falling like rain

Absorbed by the terrain

Rising and falling

The cycle of life calling

Free Verse

About the Creator

Brenda Ramsey

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