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Laments of an Avocado

I Was Not Picked

By Wanjiru CiiraPublished 10 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
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I tried to be the best on the tree

Adorned in my best green outfit

I applied skin smoother

To get rid of blemishes and discoloration

And hoped to be picked

****

Competing with my siblings

I maintained a uniform distance between pips

A symmetrical body

And just the right weight

To be picked

****

Last season, my sister was too big

She was not picked

The year before, my cousin matured

But remained small in stature

He was not picked

****

This time, I was the right size, color, and shape

I was picked

****

At the store, I sat with others on display

Customers came and examined us

Some were gentle; others pressed and pinched us

I waited in vain to be picked

****

In the end, I became overripe

No one wanted me anymore

I was now picked for the compost pit

****

On reincarnation, I will try another line

I will come back as the best-looking orange

And hope to be picked

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Wanjiru Ciira

I'm a story-teller with an interest in the human condition. I write on relationships, health, aging, parenting, travel, and fiction. I've a background in journalism - feature-writing, reporting, and investigative journalism.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran10 months ago

    Oh that was so sad. I hope he gets picked as an orange. Loved your poem!

  • Wow..I was smiling through out😍 beautifully written.

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