Into The Void
My forty-third dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena
This is my forty-third dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
The music I have chosen is "Into The Void" by Black Sabbath from the album "Master of Reality"
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Falling Off The Edge, Into Blackness
Into The Nothing, To Lose Your Soul
Descend To Hell's Fiery Darkness
Your Body Will Burn In Satan's Hall
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There Will Be No Escape From The Void
The Nothing Will Tear Your Soul Apart
Forever Descending Soon Destroyed
Devils Will Tear Out Your Beating Heart
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Falling Into A Whirlpool Of Pain
The Screaming Silence Drives You Insane
Hammered And Hurt, Every Bone Broken
Evil Here, No Curse Left Unspoken
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Your Body Gives Up Its Final Breath
You Give Up Your Soul And Welcome Death
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Comments (5)
This was sooooo dark and creepy! I loved it!
This hit the mark for dark!
I really love your dark stuff just as much as your sweet, bright stuff! Great job :)
Wow! Nice job. :)
OMGOSH! ๐ฏ This gets an A+ on the creep-o-meter! There's a very dark/love feeling just in the cadence alone. Well done!