Lying here with you
your love covers me
like a blanket.
Our hands like
tangled sheets.
Legs intertwined,
no way of knowing
where we end, begin
or meet.
Our hearts beat
together, in sync,
so if I told you
I was madly
in love with you
what would
you think?
About the Creator
ᔕᗩᗰ ᕼᗩᖇTY
Sam Harty is a poet of raw truth and quiet rebellion. Author of Lost Love Volumes I & II and The Lost Little Series, her work confronts heartbreak, trauma, and survival with fierce honesty and lyrical depth. Where to find me
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The Light Turns
It's Tuesday 7:13 a.m. A cold and clear November morning awaits Ray on his morning commute. Ray rubs his hands together in the front seat of his Subaru. He turns the air temperature up, but keeps the air on low until the air warms up. He looks at the backup camera screen and reverses the Subaru out of his driveway onto Trimble Road.
By John R. Godwin4 days ago in Fiction
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Nice, Sam it flows very nicely
Such a beautiful tribute to a lover <3
Beautiful ♦️🙏✍️♦️
Gorgeously written!
A budding of a new relationship.
Breathe, your love poem is a breath of fresh air, 🌹🌹🌹🌹