How to Let Go
Bottled up bullshit got you down?
Stiffened neck from the weighted crown?
You want to know about catharsis?
Thankfully, you came to the artist
I wrote the book, you know
The art of letting go
Years of practice
We been at this
Giving a shit
Til sick of it
Replacing bad luck
—Not giving a fuck
So that pit in your gut... Guess what?
No one else minds
Living their daily grinds
So just like them not caring 'bout you
Just forget it too
Relief don't come from constant worry
So drop that shit- and hurry
Time spent fixatin' and stressin'
Just keeps you from your blessin'
Under the crunch of concern
Your soul just burns
Trapped in your mind
The problem rewinds
Take a lesson from the professor of profanity
Clear your damn insanity
Remember you deserve a little treat
Reward yourself with something sweet
Self-care's super important, right?
So let's get fucked up tonight!
T-Swizzle said it best
Cause, you're gonna Shake It Off next
Get dressed up and feelin' hot
A fix-all— one more shot
Liquid courage in a short glass
Then go shake your ass
The problem is obviously thinking
Like most, it's easily solved by drinking
Take a deep breath in and spit it back out
Then drink until you black out
Gone are the dark thoughts and slurs
Replaced with dark droughts and blurs
Party it out, bump and thrive
How'd I get home? Did I drive?
Stumble into bed
Last thing before a pounding head
Wake up stiff and pissed
Cross the old problem off the list.
Replace it with the new one.
Coyote ugly, what have I done?
Comments (40)
Clever, and insightful! I ❤️ it!!
Just learning about Nonet poetry. Powerful, you tell them -you won't be their meal. This will take a little learning - this nonet poetry.
Pretty, but meant for prey - I love this! Well done on placing 👏
Congratulations on placing in the challenge ✅… unique take on the challenge.
So powerful! Congrats on placing!!
Congrats! Great analogy and stellar use of imagery!
I’m sorry I missed this the first time around, RC! Smashing poetry and gut punch of a final line. Congrats on placing!
Such a wonderful and original image! Love it!
Well done on your challenge placement ! 🫶🏻😇🌟💜👌
I love your nonet - congratulations on your win!
Fantastic piece. I adore the dynamic between the larger, natural force and the personal. Both are juxtaposed so well. Congrats on placing!
Congratulations! Well deserved, what a punch that last sentence delivers <3 <3
Congratulations.
Congratulations!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Gorgeous and absolutely wonderfully written.
Great take on the challenge, perfect last lines, and also good scientific knowledge 😅
Congratulations on your Top Story! 👏👏👏👏👏
Lovely piece
The understanding that the glow is meant to attract prey rather than serve a romantic purpose carries a poignant message, love your works, subscribed.
Concise, creative, and strongly worded! Awesome poem here!
Ooh nicely done. Angelfish are so fascinating. I read in a museum exhibit once that the males attach to the females like parasites and sometimes permanently fuse into their skin… sounds like something from a horror movie 😅😅
Nice reminds me of the anglerfish in Finding Nemo
Wow, this is brilliantly menacing!! Congrats on the Top Story, this piece is AWESOME :)
I love just how much this conveys in such a few carefully selected words! 🩷