Hunger, Obsession and Lust
I did not imagine my husband while writing this. I will leave it there lol. Works I am absolutely loving from the following witers 🌹Tanya Rosa Marie, Paul Stewart, Harper Lewis, Jamye Sharp, Novel Allen, Antoni De’Leon, Sandy Gillman, A.J Schoenfeld🌹 in no particular order ♥️👌🏽👏🏽🙌🏽
{My lily sweet soul} hungers —for your star gaze
[Humbly] splitting the tides —for your sunrise
Take me higher than my body weighs ©️
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{Chase me} where the wind blows {in lovers maze}
Slip and slide —the force between my thick thighs
My Lilly sweet soul hungers for your star gaze ©️
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My lust lies —in times — old flame {beneath blaze}
Your guilty touch —the thing —my ring denies
Take me higher than my body weighs
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Tease me into your lovers bed —always
I tame my bud until the day arrives
My lily sweet soul hungers for your star gaze
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Humbled by your size —tightly my lip —stays
Cursed in miles —but not fazed —this lust survives
Take me higher than my body weighs ©️
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Threw it all away for your size — it pays
Undress —caress and —look me in the eyes
My lily sweet soul hungers for your star gaze
Take me higher than my body weighs ©️
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Caitlin Charlton
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It ended like every other stupid idea. Badly, and alone. I’m researching digital confession ethics, he said. A tech ethicist. He gestured at floating data I couldn’t see then pulled out a physical notebook. Actual paper, fountain pen. He held it up like he was showing me scripture.
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Caitlin, this was unexpectedly sultry and I loved it!! A late congrats on taking first place in last weeks leaderboard!!
Oh this was so sexy!
OH HOW INSPIRING! Erotica is a gift that keeps on giving! (Don't ask me how I know 😁😉) Now write some more...QUICK! 😁
Returning to congratulate you on leading this week's leadership board!💜
Such a sensory and suggestive feast. Brilliant and congratulations on the leaderboard win
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Wow, Caitlin--villanelles are especially challenging to me, and you've crafted this one so beautifully. I get echoes of E.E. Cummings with your brilliant use of punctuation in sensory imagery. This one is exceptional.
Definitely how one should want their spouse.
Sensuous, lush and unapologetic in her longing. I wished to be her, To be her lover and I hoped for them to meet again. Beautifully written, lovely Caitlin!
Sassy and spicy in a sugary, seductive blend. Nice work, Caitlin. I love how you feature other creators' work, too. Now I have a guide, lol. I get so behind here and appreciate all that you do!💜
Works for me, Caitlin. I loved all the subtle innuendos. 😉😉
Whoaaa, this was so brilliantly executed! I'm so terrified to try a Villanelle and it makes me so happy to see how awesomely you nailed this! Loved your poem!
Wow, this piece is beautifully intense! The rhythm and repetition make it feel almost like a song. Thanks for the shoutout!
Oh my, in the way of Taylor’s new songs….smooth and sexy. Fine work💕
Stunning work CC! Passion & Heat personified! 🔥💪🏾🎉
Oooh that was a little spicy 🥵 I quite enjoyed this. Nice work. Spicy in the best way 🔥🔥 sexy without being smut. Well done! 💯👍
The way you link nature and emotion together is really captivating. Love the passion and vulnerability here.
Beautiful poem, Caitlin.
Steamy is the best way to put this. I was especially alerted by the line about the ring. And "Take me higher than my body weighs.." climactic!
This is a poem of sensual delights, reminiscent of the maiden’s voice in The Song of Solomon. This is a wonderfully passionate Villanelle, Caitlin. Deeply impressed! Good luck on the challenge!
Well now. Checks pulse. Opens a window to get some fresh air in this place. Well done on doing such a smooth and rhythmic job with the Villanelle and also making it very steamy too. Tastefully steamy. Like, it stayed the right side and avoided crassness. Hope you're doing alright, Caitlin, lass. This is stunning work. Also, thank you for the shoutout and among such great writers too!
Mesmerized and obsessed. Eyes like stars hold your gaze. This felt like a gentle lead, in a space where you can just be. Sensual and full, desire takes the reigns and pulls you in to something to soothe your soul. This such a powerful and beautiful piece Caitlin <3 How are you doing with everything?
woo, steamy, what a tantalizing piece. Wonderful, Villanelles are tough, and you did a great job with it.
This is a brave sort of writing, can’t help but admire that. Poem is perfectly worded and paced, you used the repetition and format to great effect. Nicely done Caitlin :)
I have never been able to crack this form, this is absolutely beautiful