cresting the steep climb,
i face the ultimate thrill—
sensations ignite
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
"Life is Love Experienced" -LW
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No Word Comes Near Enough
The English language has its limits. I learned this when I became a student of the Bible and looked up the Greek and Hebrew definitions behind the Scriptures I loved. Some languages have so much more depth and power than the one I use to convey my thoughts. But, even so, I don't think any word could ever come close to describing this void and pain I am journeying through. I don't know how to swim through its murky waters.
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Winterthorne
Winterthorne stood alone at the edge of the park. The beautiful snow that had surrounded him was all trampled now, from the feet of all of the children who had built him. He missed the sparkly clean snow blanket, but he was happy that so many children had come out to make him.
By Laura DePace6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (10)
This is like describing life and its journey. hills to climb to the ultimate goals. Deep meanings.
What a great haiku for the description of roller coaster riding and yes even living life in general. Great job.
There's that moment before the drop.... You captured it so well. I'm still trembling. ! Good work! 🤗
nice work-reminds me of a fortune cookie-you climb the highest mountain from the lowest point
My stomach just did a flip :)
Aaahhhhh!! That's me going on your roller coaster ride hahahaha! Loved this!
Love this
Great haiku, Lamar, brought up some memories for me.
Get it Lamar! This is a winner! This made me want to revisit the 'Wild Cat' roller coaster at the Washington State Fair! lol
Definitely, how I feel before the Rollercoaster goes down.