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One Unchecked Box
"Republished" because it was the only way to add the embed for the newly recorded audio version of this story due to the Top Story badge. Plus it serves as a nice, informal announcement of the podcast's revival for another season (go subscribe!):
By Stephen A. Roddewig7 days ago in Fiction
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Nicely done!
I don't really understand the context here, so sorry 😅😅
The flow of the poem feels almost like a wistful breath, and the choice of words adds such depth to the emotions you're conveying. It's a touching exploration of love, separation, and the hope of one day being reunited. Thank you for sharing this poignant and beautifully written piece. It really resonated with me.
Wonderfully written. But I don't find it too sad, I actually find it uplifting
Oh this has such a beautiful melancholy sense of loss to it, and so lyrical too! Wonderful poem, Spinstress!