Falling for Fun
Inspired by the joy captured in a painting
By A. J. SchoenfeldPublished 4 months ago • 1 min read
"Afternoon Magic in Great-Grandma's Back Yard," Painting by B. Gaisford (aka Momma)
Crispy, crackly, crunch
Painted, pillowy piles plead
Don’t delay, dive in!
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A. J. Schoenfeld
I only write about the real world. But if you look close enough, you'll see there's magic hiding in plain sight everywhere.
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Comments (4)
We can re-learn from children...if only we would. Loved it
I love this haiku AJ, it explains what every child experiences when they jump in a pile of leaves. I couldn't quite tell who the author is of the painting, but I just read Rick's response, and it was your mother's painting. Quite beautiful and you did her proud with her haiku. Nicely Done my friend.
I love this haiku. It has a sense of movement and youthful abandon - dive in. The painting is a masterpiece beautifully rendered.
Love the alliteration!