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Swish: raincoat rustling
Sliding slipping: shoes shuffling
Golden between days
About the Creator
Judey Kalchik
It's my time to find and use my voice.
Poetry, short stories, memories, and a lot of things I think and wish I'd known a long time ago.
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Comments (4)
Remind me how a child would enjoy the fall
I can hear the sounds of each with each phrase. Good job.
I especially loved the alliteration in your second line+
I love the sense of whimsical movement in this Haiku. I pictured a small child discovering golden leaves floating in puddles.