This poem was written in response to the Rattle® Poetry Ekphrastic Challenge for May 2025 and was ultimately not selected. You can find more information here.
https://www.rattle.com/ekphrastic/
Empty
You kept it in the old horse barn
A 1968 Chevrolet Chevelle SS 396
In beautiful midnight blue
Back in our younger days
We drove it down to St. Augustine
To let the sea sing us a love song
Out to Grand Teton
To sleep under stars
It was your baby
After me of course
You kept your priorities straight
Loved taking it out for a spin
After church on Sundays
Then, the week before last
You took it out for one last ride
Before the snows came
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And you wrapped it around a tree
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I placed a wooden cross and flowers
But you aren’t there
You are up on the mantle
Above the fireplace
Your urn is full and heavy
It’s the only thing that’s full in this house
Except for the freezer
The ladies from church filled it
With casseroles
I have four styles of funeral potatoes
But no appetite to eat
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Now winter is rolling down from the north
Like storms across the prairie in summer
Sweeping through the vacant barn
Door swinging in the wind
I pace a silent house
You are no longer here
Playing your Elvis records
My heart cleaved in two
I am forlorn
For I have nothing left
To fill this life with
Your passing has left everything
Empty
Submitted under MRB
About the Creator
Rae Fairchild (MRB)
I love to write; putting pen to paper fills my heart and calms my soul!
Rae Fairchild is my pen name. (Because why not? Pseudonyms are cool!)
I do publish elsewhere under my real name, M.R.B.


Comments (3)
I cried and laughed! Loved the line about the funeral potatoes which is soooo true
I remember watching my mom's face when she buried my dad and then, two years later, my brother. Death is never easy - at least not for the living. GREAT poem.
You should have won...🏆