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Dune

Supernatural desire

By Elysia DawnPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

Cinnamon sands breathe an ocean,
tame but wild and echoing
within my skin

I am a reflection of your longing,
A palace of copper stolen from
the mouths of silent archetypes

I burn from your touch
though I do not feel your distance,
I move at your kiss,
though it is felt in the sight of sound

I overwhelm through the power
of my forces of nature;
I am like lightning
moving in summer

Though I am gentle.
I will never blind you with
the stutter of my flesh.

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Elysia Dawn

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  • Bren3 years ago

    I did not expect that! Almost perfect!

  • Sanjeev3 years ago

    Nice...❤️

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