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Door Wide Sh(i)ut

Dad

By Paul BeckettPublished 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
No-Fwcking-More!

Door wide shut

The mare, that lay lame,

Flogged mercilessly,

Escaped the hot griddle,

So gangrene set in.

Supporting its blood-life,

Transfusions mistrust,

Prolonged the inevitable,

Severance bolt.

She dreamed in passing,

Of what could, but wasn’t.

Content in the folding,

As synapses smother.

That without her meat,

A burdens unbridle.

The stable door opener,

The remedy’s arrival’s.

That shutter, a distraction,

As reconnection occurs.

From canters, to gallop.

The energy resurgence.

The freedom of being,

Starts just as she ceases.

The barrier closed, she is,

Released.

Familyslam poetry

About the Creator

Paul Beckett

I’m a writer, horologist & joy filled explorer. Reality to me is plastic. I’m fascinated with time, quantum physics, analogue and fashion.

My writings at least 69% autobiographical, often 99%

Fav:Johnny Panic and the Bible of Dreams- S.Plath

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  • Test11 months ago

    This poem is a deep reflection on the pain of the human soul that has experienced loss. The vivid images describe the patient's acceptance of this pain and the need for healing and freedom. A wonderful journey through your emotions! ☀️

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