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A moment when
I saw you
across the room
and for a moment
the moments paused
the din disappeared
just like the movies
only unscripted
unrehearsed
unreal
I've seen into your depths
an endless well of
innocent
compassion
selfless
kind
humble
gentle
thoughtful
generous
patient
scarred
you think of everyone else
long before you think of yourself
giving away your coat
on a freezing day
giving away your food
to our homeless friend
no self-promotion
your needs come last
you hide your pain
but I see it
feel it
know it
we are experts at
sticking our smiles on
straight
after we've used them
several times
to hide behind
smiling is not as messy
after all
but you...
you are amazing
in all ways
you are beautiful
in all ways
you are spontaneous
and so much fun
you want everyone
to feel special
to feel seen
to feel heard
God's own creation
fearfully and wonderfully
created
perfectly imperfect
but perfect
as you are
just the way you are
what a blessing to have
such a magnificent
friend
as you.
About the Creator
Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. β€οΈ
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