Deliverance
An acrostic poem for the Moment of Silence Challenge
silence prevails throughout the city,
intruders become alive among the crowd,
last chance it is, they're facing destiny,
each one moves with its invisible cloud.
no need to hurry, plenty of time they have,
clearing the sky, that's what they sweared to do,
empathy and justice are the laws they pursue.
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Comments (10)
Intriguing and lovely acrostic poem.
“Intruders” is such a strong word, and can be taken both ways here which is clever. The clouds and empty sky imagery is interesting, and I like how this topic is an original one, different to a lot of what I’ve read so far. Good luck in the challenge Anna🤗
Beautiful! Best wishes for the challenge
Lovely acrostic, good luck in the challenge! ☺
Oooo, this was so deep! Loved your Acrostic!
Fantastic!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
Powerful and so beautifully done! ❤️
Wonderful take on the challenge. Well done.
Love love love this!!! Warriors for the faith are often viewed as intruders by the enemy, he hates our mission of “Interrupt and Intercept”… Well done, Anna ❤️😁
My take! A clever portrayal of the pursuers of justice as intruders. Shows how rare this entity is at times.