Darkness
A Poems Of Bad Feelings
This is a dark poem for Dharrsheena . It is not how I feel; I needed it to be short and stabby. So here are my words. The music is "Darkness" by Van Der Graaf Generator.
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Why Can I Not See?
I Am In Darkness
There Is No Hope Here
No Light, Total Stress
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Will This Ever End?
When Death Comes To Me
I Will Lose My Mind
Never To Be Free
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Darkness Now Owns Me
My Eyes Blind, Canโt See
Now I Can Not Move
Just Hate, Thereโs No Love
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Falling Into Darkness
Rats Tear My Carcass
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Comments (9)
Wow was not expecting the ending but it made it just perfect Mike.
liked it combined with the song
The last line is epic
FALLING INTO DARKNESS! RATS TEAR MY CARCASS! I absolutely loved these lines and it was the cherry on top of the cake! This is how we should embrace our darkness. Thank you so much for this poem, it made my day! ๐
Wonderfully done. And a perfect image to go along with the poem.
Definitely dark!!!๐๐๐๐
You can rise to any occasion and create a poem or prose to fill a special request. Those last two lines sure fit the short, stabby, and dark mode. Custom-made illustrations, too. Well done!
Short and stabby. Lol. Dhar is corrupting you. Well done.
Nice , getting ready for Halloween, I see