Dandelion
Make a wish!
Tiny, fluffy seeds
Sent adrift because of me
Off to spread new life
About the Creator
Heather Zieffle
I'm an avid fantasy and sci-fi romance writer who enjoys dabbling in other genres from time to time. I have a few self-published books on Kindle so please check them out!
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The Devil's Triangle
The sails ruffled in the breeze as we cruised along. The Sea Breeze was a mid-size catamaran that sailed out of Royal Naval Dockyard in Bermuda. We had booked this trip weeks in advance and were now looking at our Captain, Spike and two boat hands. Paddy and Wilson seemed like nice guys, joking around with the passengers and telling us some stories about Bermuda that only locals would know. Their island accents sounded almost British but they were pleasant to listen to.
By Barbara Gode Wilesabout 15 hours ago in Fiction
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Lovely haiku, Heather! Well done!
Hi Hz - I enjoy how you reap so much out of so few words. I've been down for a few months - forgot to get my vaccination for 'Old Age' but I've always enjoyed your 'ecletic' unique stories; especially this light one. A Favor: I know that you are a super follower of our Rachel; I see your thoughtful comments all the time. Please leave a comment on her 'Ode to Rachel Deeming' Post. The year-long writings are so impressive. I know she would appreciate the gesture from you. Thank you, - Jk.in.l.a -
beaaaaautiful, Heather! so light but meaningful
I loved your haiku! Kids don’t realize what seeds they sow…but you expressed it here; everyone who makes a wish on a dandelion❤️
Sometimes we just don't realize the impact we have in this world. Your poem made me think of everybody who ever believed in me. Loved your poem and thank you.
ohhh love this hauki! so soft and beautiful!
ARE YOU A GOD? 😂 Sorry, been watching Ghostbusters 😁 Loved your haiku!
Awesome!!! We are co-creators more than we know.
Thank you for inspiring me. I hope you don't mind I've mentioned your Beautiful haiku! https://todaysurvey.life/poets/dandelion-kiss%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
This is so lovely. Well done.
you are simply the best
Love this ❤️
I have made several wishes and wrote a lot about dandelions
This was so incredibly lovely! I really loved it. I hope you enter this into the Sky Ku Challenge!!
This was soooo wonderful! I loved it!
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Well done.