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Claimed Salvation

Unnecessary Line

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about 6 hours ago 1 min read
Claimed Salvation
Photo by Aida L on Unsplash

I woke up from a peaceful dream

Into a cold reality

Wanting desperately to flee those feelings

And retreat into what was left behind

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Open 24/7, but not all at once

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Tangled in the kind love

That you feel before a loss

An extraordinary, ordinary love

You'd pay to save at any cost

Turns out, was only make believe

I thought that love might set me free

The truth is, you never really wanted me

Caught up in another form of slavery

Until I decided to walk away

The chains released and to this day

The only thing that made me change

Was loving me, more than the pain

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Tiffany Gordon30 minutes ago

    Get it gurl! Uber-Eloquent & Empowering! Go Kelli!

  • Mark Grahamabout 2 hours ago

    A lot of love went into this poem and understanding on many parts. Good job.

  • Mariann Carrollabout 6 hours ago

    Beautiful. Loving me more than the pain 🥰

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