Brilliant Moon
A Nonet Breakup Poem
By Cindy CalderPublished 2 years ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Brilliant moon high in the endless sky
Give me strength this night to pursue
The dreams he stole, by and by.
Help me to start anew -
Enjoy love's sweet high,
Not dismal views
Of love’s lies
While I
Cry.
About the Creator
Cindy Calder
From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo
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Comments (10)
Wow. This is so impactful and well-written.
This is lovely
Nicely done, by and by.
Moon is one of my sutras so whenever I see a poem dedicated to it I stop by. I loved your poem!
So purely beautiful the words and the photo truly healing nonet!
Very emotive piece Cindy
I love the image you create with this and the tempo is spectacular. Great poem!
Spectacular
Oh this was such a beautiful prayer! I loved it!
Beautiful take on the challenge and great image