it’s the nothing inside
the nothings that slide
it’s a trap it’s the snap
it’s the motionless glide
it’s a void in a vacuum
a place of no trace
null, less than zero
a step out of space
it’s the hum in the drum
it’s the hic in a cup
a swerve in a curve
its all shut and no up
it’s the noise in the silence
it’s a cancelled today
it’s the numb it’s the mindless
it’s a frittering away
it’s a clock moving backwards
toc tic toc tic
its behind the rewind
its viscous and slick
it’s a paralysis of self
its apathetic inactions
the very substance of nothing
its lack of reactions
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
The Angry Man in Your House
"If you grow up with an angry man in your house, there will always be an angry man in your house" This statement has caused plenty of controversy online, people say its a statement that blames victims while also undermining those who break traumatic cycles to form health relationships... but if I'm honest now that I'm in my 30s it makes more sense to me than ever, and I'd argue that its not just about fathers and uncles.
By S. A. Crawford3 days ago in Humans
Comments (4)
This feels like a description of Cheese Week 😁
Nicely done! I agree with Andrew. The flow was superb! The first time I heard 'Bored', I put it on repeat for another 3 or 4 or 5 times. That song ROCKS!!!
Wow, what a famtastic flow this has. Not a single hic in this cup Brenton. Absolutely love it.100%. 🥳🥳🥳🔥🔥🔥👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥
This is such a unique and awesome piece!