Bitter Lover Haiku

Not a nice person

By Marie381Uk Published about 22 hours ago • 1 min read

By George’s Girl 2026

Bitter Lover Haiku

Your lips taste bitter

lemons are your indulgence

The ugly dead love

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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Mark Grahamabout 19 hours ago
This is a sad and bitter little haiku.
Sibghaabout a year ago
Deeply evocative!
Andrew C McDonaldabout a year ago
Nice senryu Marie

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