Beneath the Skin
What Crawls in the Dark Always Finds a Way In

There’s something writhing in the walls,
It slithers when the night turns black,
A scrape, a drag, a wet exhale,
And then it’s crawling back.
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It knows the filth you bury deep,
It whispers every sin,
It drinks your dread in shallow gulps,
And digs beneath your skin.
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Its hands are splintered, cracked with rot,
Its nails bite through your bone,
It waits beneath your sagging bed,
And hums a broken tone.
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You think it’s gone—your breath goes still—
Until you hear it weep,
Its voice like shattered glass and oil,
That pulls you from your sleep.
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It drags itself through hollow cracks,
Its limbs all wrong and thin,
It wears a rotting mask of you,
And grins an empty grin.
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That voice inside your fragile skull?
It never once was yours.
It slithered in the night you dreamt,
And claimed you through the doors.
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You try to run, but flesh won’t move—
The terror roots too tight—
Its hands erupt beneath your ribs,
And pull you into night.
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The mirror’s glass warps what you see:
Your skin sloughs off in streams,
The thing that stares back isn’t you—
You’re locked inside its seams.
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It pulses in your marrow now,
It twists beneath your veins,
It wears your body like a cloak,
And feeds on what remains.
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You scream, but silence wraps your throat,
Your lips no longer yours—
And in the dark, it grins again,
As your soul rots in its pores.
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Comments (5)
such an amazing writer, with a great piece
Strong visual lines throughout the piece really hits the reader with a bang. I like this one a lot
This is chilling! The imagery is so vivid and haunting, it gave me goosebumps. You've captured the essence of fear and dread in such a powerful way—truly unsettling and well-written!🫶🏽
Yaaay you’ve published another story 🤪😁🥳I was singing your words in my head and doing a little dance. Such a nice treat. One of many lines that stood out to me was this one (The thing that stares back isn’t you— You’re locked inside its seams.) you’re playing with our security, and our need to feel terrified. Juggling them and never dropping one. Absolutely amazing.
This is very creepy and at times gross yet imaginative. Good work.