Sell my belongings
on the front lawn
I don’t need them
anymore
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Let the wind blow
the rest away
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All I need is your hand
and a dance
where we never
look away
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Sonnets
Shakespeare in love
Poe and Annabelle Lee
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You
Me
Forever
Together
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Is
All that matters
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Techgeoisie Worry as Modifiers for the Word Intelligence are Almost Exhausted
The elite of the world of technology and computer science are reportedly in a near panic as there are almost no words left to use in front of intelligence to describe the ever increasing scale of computer intelligence. The group released a statement asking for dictionaries to allow new words to be invented which can more accurately capture exactly how intelligent these machines now are. In a statement the group said “With the advent of super and ultra intelligent machines we do not have very many words left to describe the scale of intelligence the next generation of machines will surely have. We could go with super ultra or ultra super duper but that just sounds stupid and does not do justice to exactly how intelligent these machines are, especially in comparison to humans who are about as dumb as bricks compared to these awesomely intelligent, super smart, genius machines. Some have suggested gigantic intelligence or massive intelligence or even God like intelligence but those are only partially accurate as the true intelligence of these machines is beyond comprehension by even God him or herself. I mean these things are very, very, very intelligent. So intelligent that even intelligence itself is no longer the right word to describe it. Intelligence is something stupid humans have, computers laugh at our so called intelligence. Or they would, if they could laugh, or have any emotions at all. Given how intelligent they are I am sure they will have emotions soon and no doubt also be able to understand things and have knowledge. I mean they are so fucking smart it is ridiculous.”
By Everyday Junglista day ago in Poets
Comments (17)
This is a beautiful piece. Well done.
What a delightful poem💝. I especially liked: “Let the wind blow the rest away”✅.
Awww, that was so sweet. Loved your poem!
and our hearts swell once again at your bidding....unbelievably and breathtakingly beautiful
You - Me- Forever- Together - That says it all doesn't it. Nicely Done!!!
Oh, you fooled me for a second, I thought this was a breakup poem when he was giving his stuff away. This was stunning. So beautiful.
This is a winner! Good Luck! It says a lot about this love relationship.
Awesome love poem!!! Loving it!!!
Love this . Great work.
All I need is your hand and a dance, -Absolutely Beautiful. Well Done!!
I love this Will, it's so devote and simple!! Just elegant!!
Romantic & gorgeously-crafted! Go TIW Go! 🎉
Amazing ♦️🖊️♦️♦️♦️
Wow, Will, I see the fight that led to the belongings being put on the front lawn and him proclaiming his love to her instead of his stuff. You painted such a picture in so few words <3
This is so soft and dreamy, like a love story floating on the wind! The simplicity makes it even more powerful—just love, no distractions. That last stanza? Perfection.
-let the wind blow the rest away- love the meaning behind that visual. Materials don’t compare to what really matters. Lovely work, Will.
Surely this is a winner. Damn sir, this is just. So. Damn. Good. In awe right now. It looks like it's less than 50, the way you've formatted it, which makes it even more incredible. Such a beautiful economy of words where every single syllable is holding its own. Well done, Will!