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Agape Love

Unnecessary Line Challenge

By Marilyn GloverPublished about 16 hours ago Updated about 15 hours ago 1 min read
Image- Sunriseforever by Pixabay- Edited by Marilyn Glover with Canva

Neat. Clean. Tidy. Kept. My roses always bloom

I eat smiles for breakfast

Hope is my chaser

I drink it down really fast when despair attempts toxicity

Walking, walking with me are angels

Michael, Metatron, Gabriel

Engulfing me in wings

While prepping my very own

Humanity upticker; heart, soul, spirit- jumping for joy's sake

I'm just a grunge girl, slowly digging my own grave

Beautiful planet. Beautiful people. Beautiful life.

Positive reinforcement

Positive feedback

Positive fast-forward to the end of the tape

Agape love

My design

My earthbound mission

Unselfish

Giving freely

Expecting nothing in return

Goodwill and commitment

More than a feeling

An active choice

Forget Philio. Forget Eros.

My love is intentional; the highest mountain top view

Patience

Kindness

Endurance

Fellowship

Brotherhood

Preparing a love feast to rewrite the human mindset

Neat. Clean. Tidy. Kept

My roses always bloom; I eat smiles for breakfast

~

Author's Note: This is my one-and-done entry for the Unnecessary Line Challenge, celebrating agape love with an uncomfortable twist: the thought of doing something foolish, which may contribute to one's downfall or ruin.

Many thanks to all who read! ❤

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About the Creator

Marilyn Glover

Poet, writer, & editor, writing to uplift humanity. A Spiritual person who practices Reiki and finds inspiration in nature.

Mother of four, grandmother of two, British American dual citizen living in the States

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  • Sandy Gillmanabout 4 hours ago

    I love how you balance tenderness with edge. The unnecessary line is perfect too!

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout 7 hours ago

    Not me imagining you ripping out the smiles from people's faces and eating them, lol. Loved your poem!

  • Jay Kantorabout 10 hours ago

    Mg - Well, you certainly 'splashed' it all out on me. You have a TerricTude; not so with me. I've never had your kind of patience, and I've worked on it..! So, Marilyn, is your knee well enough now to kick cans down the street? Best to you, Jk.in.l.a.

  • Edward Swaffordabout 14 hours ago

    😂😂😂 I love how ultra this poem is. Beaming with positivity and light, the unnecessary line has me giggling, this piece should sweep it in - easily. I can kind of see you being grungy at heart, or having a grungy past which belies your evolution as a healer 😚😚

  • Sara Wilsonabout 15 hours ago

    Marilyn! This is simply beautiful and I love the artwork!

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout 15 hours ago

    That's humanity. We are always kept...though we have our challenges. Masterfully expressed, Marilyn!

  • Jessica McGlaughlinabout 15 hours ago

    I like the contrast with the line of such hopefulness with something a bit darker

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