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The Day the Mountain Answered

A quiet journey about persistence, self-belief, and the courage to keep climbing

By Asghar ali awanPublished about an hour ago 3 min read
The Day the Mountain Answered
Photo by Lara Baeriswyl on Unsplash

At the edge of a small town stood a mountain that didn’t look especially tall. It had no famous name, no marked trails, and no visitors’ center. Yet everyone in town knew about it. People spoke of it the way they spoke about dreams—beautiful from a distance, intimidating up close.

Most people admired the mountain from their windows. Only a few ever tried to climb it. And almost none reached the top.

Mira had lived in that town her entire life. Every morning she passed the mountain on her way to work. She always slowed down at the same bend in the road, rolled down her window, and looked up. She imagined what the world must look like from the summit. Clearer. Wider. Brighter.

But imagination was as far as she had ever gone.

“You should try,” her grandfather used to say. “Not because it’s easy. Because it will teach you who you are.”

Mira would laugh and change the subject. She had responsibilities, deadlines, expectations. Dreams were for people with extra time.

Then one ordinary morning, something shifted.

She had just been turned down for a promotion she had worked toward for three years. Her boss had praised her dedication, her reliability, her patience then handed the opportunity to someone else. Someone “more ready.”

That evening, Mira sat quietly in her room, replaying the conversation over and over. She felt small. Replaceable. Stuck.

And then she remembered the mountain.

The next morning, without announcing it to anyone, Mira packed a small bag. Water. Bread. A notebook. She stood at the base of the mountain and looked up.

From this close, it didn’t look inspiring. It looked steep, rocky, and unforgiving.

She almost turned back.

But something inside her whispered, If not today, when?

So she took her first step.

The beginning was manageable. A narrow dirt path wound through patches of grass and small stones. Mira walked carefully, measuring her breath, adjusting her pace.

Within an hour, the path grew steeper. The ground became uneven. Her legs began to burn. She stopped often, telling herself she would go just a little farther.

At midday, she reached a ledge overlooking the town. From there, everything looked smaller houses like tiny blocks, roads like threads. The sight filled her with quiet pride.

She had never seen her world from this angle before.

But when she looked upward, she realized she was not even halfway.

Her confidence faded. Doubt returned.

“What am I doing?” she murmured. “I’m not strong enough for this.”

As if in answer, a gust of wind swept across the slope, rustling leaves and carrying a sound that reminded her of her grandfather’s voice: Climb to learn who you are.

Mira sat down, opened her notebook, and wrote a single sentence:

“I am still here.”

Then she stood up and continued.

The next stretch was the hardest. The trail disappeared entirely, replaced by jagged rock. She slipped once, scraping her hands. She considered quitting more than once.

But something unexpected began to happen.

With every obstacle, she stopped asking, Can I do this? and started asking, What is the next step?

Not the whole mountain. Just the next foothold. The next breath. The next movement.

Hours passed. The sky softened into evening gold. Her body ached, but her mind grew strangely calm.

Finally, she reached a narrow ridge. One last incline rose before her. It was steep but short. She climbed slowly, pulling herself upward with steady determination.

And then, suddenly, there was no more slope.

She had arrived.

The summit was quiet. No signs. No crowds. Just open sky and a horizon that stretched endlessly.

Mira stood still, letting the moment settle into her bones.

She had expected triumph to feel loud, dramatic, overwhelming.

Instead, it felt peaceful.

She realized the mountain had not changed. The town had not changed. The world had not changed.

She had.

She understood something she had never fully grasped before: readiness is not something granted by others. It is built, step by step, through action despite uncertainty.

As the sun dipped below the horizon, Mira opened her notebook again and wrote:

“I was never waiting for the right time. I was waiting to trust myself.”

When she returned to town, nothing outwardly remarkable happened. No one gathered to celebrate her climb. Life continued as usual.

But Mira walked differently now. She applied for opportunities she once believed were beyond her. She spoke with quiet confidence. She stopped measuring herself by other people’s decisions.

And whenever fear whispered that she wasn’t ready, she remembered the mountain and how it had answered her doubt with silence, allowing her actions to speak instead.

The mountain had not given her strength.

It had revealed it.

Moral of the Story:

You don’t become ready before you begin. You become ready because you begin.

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About the Creator

Asghar ali awan

I'm Asghar ali awan

"Senior storyteller passionate about crafting timeless tales with powerful morals. Every story I create carries a deep lesson, inspiring readers to reflect and grow ,I strive to leave a lasting impact through words".

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