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The Whispering House

A Night When Silence Spoke

By Sudais ZakwanPublished about 12 hours ago 3 min read

It was a cold and rainy evening when Emma decided to finally visit the old house at the end of Willow Street. Everyone in the town had warned her not to go there. They said it was haunted, that strange noises came from inside, and that no one who entered stayed the same afterward. But Emma was always curious. She wanted to see it for herself and maybe even discover something no one else had noticed before. With a small flashlight in one hand and her notebook in the other, she stepped onto the wet cobblestone path that led to the house.

As soon as she entered, the wooden floorboards groaned under her feet. The air smelled old and damp, like forgotten memories. The walls were lined with faded wallpaper, peeling in several places, and shadows moved strangely in the corners. Emma tried to convince herself that it was just her imagination. Still, a chill ran down her spine, and she wrapped her coat tighter around her.

She started walking through the hallway slowly, her flashlight cutting through the darkness. Old portraits of people with solemn faces stared at her. Emma felt as if their eyes followed her everywhere she went. She stopped in front of one painting and noticed something odd: the eyes of the young girl in the portrait seemed almost alive. Emma shook her head and laughed nervously. “It’s just the light,” she whispered to herself.

Then, she heard it—a faint whisper from upstairs. “Emma…” the voice called softly. It was clear, yet it sent shivers down her spine. Emma froze, her curiosity battling her fear. She could have turned back, but something inside her pushed her forward. Slowly, carefully, she climbed the stairs. Each step echoed loudly, as if the house itself was warning her to stop.

The upstairs room was dark and full of old, broken furniture. Curtains swayed with the wind, making strange shapes on the walls. The whisper came again, this time louder and more desperate. Emma raised her flashlight and scanned the room. Then she saw it: a shadowy figure moving near the wardrobe. She swallowed hard and called out, “Who’s there?” No answer.

Summoning her courage, Emma approached the wardrobe. Something written in dust on the wall caught her attention: “HELP ME.” Her heart raced. She had never believed in ghosts, but now she wasn’t sure. The figure seemed to vanish, leaving only the cold, empty room behind.

Emma moved the wardrobe and discovered a small hidden door. It opened into a secret room that smelled of dust and decay. In the middle of the room was a tiny wooden box. With trembling hands, she opened it and found an old diary. The pages were fragile, yellowed with age. As she read, she realized it belonged to a girl named Clara, who had lived in the house over a hundred years ago. Clara had written about being trapped inside by her own family and how she had never been allowed to leave.

Emma’s heart ached as she read the last words: “If anyone finds this, set me free.” The whisper returned, gentler now, almost like a sigh. Emma knew that simply reading the diary would not be enough. She promised herself she would tell Clara’s story to the world, so that the girl’s memory would finally find peace.

By the time Emma left, the rain had stopped, and dawn’s soft light touched the roof of the old house. She felt a strange calm. The house seemed less threatening now, as if Clara’s spirit had been comforted. From that day on, Emma shared the story with everyone she met. And even though she never returned to the house, sometimes when she walked past Willow Street, she felt a quiet, gentle presence beside her, as if saying thank you.

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About the Creator

Sudais Zakwan

Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions

Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.

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