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Town in Bloom

Dabbling in Drabbles No. 7

By Rachel DeemingPublished 11 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Town in Bloom
Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash

He needed a slash. Town hall. It had toilets. He got some looks but no-one stopped him.

There was a council meeting convening. He decided to listen.

"So, if we want to win "Town in Bloom", we will need money from somewhere."

He listened. Flowers? Who cared about flowers?

"The proposed skate ramp? That would free up thousands!"

No! Not the skate ramp!

"It's only delinquents who want it anyway."

He peered around the door and saw some sweaty old bloke, laughing.

Bastards.

*

He took a stick and hacked. Colourful heads flew everywhere.

"Town in Bloom"?

Not this year.

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Rachel Deeming

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock11 months ago

    One "juvenile delinquent" ramping his actions up in response to foolishness & ignorance.

  • D.K. Shepard11 months ago

    Sounds like some priorities needed sorting! Guess heโ€™s giving them a bit of a push โ€ฆ or whack

  • Sean A.11 months ago

    Oh the poor flowers!

  • I have no clue of what happened here ๐Ÿ˜… The only thing that I'm sure of is that I love that gory and violent ending hehehehehe

  • Caroline Craven11 months ago

    Great one Rachel. I hope I never become one of those smug old people who hates kids.

  • Calvin London11 months ago

    Very witty,Rachel loved it!

  • Mark Gagnon11 months ago

    If their only delinquents then why not act like one. Payback time!

  • Andrea Corwin 11 months ago

    hahaha, I loved this! That will teach them!

  • John Cox11 months ago

    Now that is creative political dissent!

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    Well, crude. I guess he wasn't going to wait to see if they all agreed or not

  • Andy Potts11 months ago

    Thanks. Now I have flashbacks to hours spent in council meetings. Some heads might usefully have flown during planning debates.

  • Lana V Lynx11 months ago

    I could feel the rage and despair, Rachel. Nicely done.

  • Paul Stewart11 months ago

    oh the rage!

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