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The Nana Adventures: A Trip to the Dentist

Eli The Brave

By Tabatha NaborsPublished about 21 hours ago 3 min read
The Nana Adventures: A Trip to the Dentist
Photo by Shiola Odan on Unsplash

Nana believed that even the smallest errands could become brave adventures. So when nine-year-old Eli learned he had a dentist appointment on Thursday afternoon, she clapped her hands softly and said, "Well then, Commander Eli, looks like it's time for Operation Sparkle Smile."

Eli tried to grin confidently. He was the oldest of the five grandchildren- the big brother to seven-year-old Maya and three-year-old Ava. his cousins, seven-year-old lila and four-year-old Jordyn, thought dentist visits were fascinating and slightly dramatic. But this trip? it was just Eli and Nana. That made it feel bigger.

Maya gave him a serious look that morning. "Ask how many teeth you have," she said, already curious.

Ava hugged him around the waist. "Bring me a sticker," she demanded sweetly.

Lila handed him a tiny folded paper. Inside was a hand-drawn "Bravery Badge."

Jordyn flexed her tiny arm. "Be strong like this," she said proudly.

Eli tucked the badge into his pocket.

The ride to the dentist's office was quieter than their usual adventures. Nana noticed Eli staring out the window. "You know," she said gently, "your cousins faced the circus trapeze with wide eyes. you faced the lions at the zoo. Today's just another kind of brave."

"I don't like the scraping sound," Eli admitted. "Ah," Nana nodded. "The mysterious scraping sound. Every hero has a sound they must conquer."

When they arrived, the building didn't look scary at all. it had bright windows and cheerful signs. Inside, the waiting room was painted with jungle animals and smiling cartoon teeth. A small fish tank bubbled quietly in the corner.

Eli shifted in his seat. "What if I have a cavity?" Nana leaned closer. "Then we fix it. That's what helpers do."

When the hygienist called his name, Eli stood tall. Nana gave him a nod-the same nod she gave before big moments. Commander to Commander.

The dental chair looked enormous, like something out of a spaceship. Eli climbed up carefully. The bright overhead light clicked on. "Feels like an interrogation lamp," he whispered. Nana chuckled. "Or a spotlight."

The hygienist counted his teeth. "Open wide!" Eli squeezed the Bravery Badge, that was given to him for Lila, in his pocket as the tools made the soft scraping sound he disliked. He focused on his Nana's voice.

"Deep breaths," she reminded him gently. "In through your nose. Out through your mouth."

He imagined the trapeze artists from the circus letting go at the right moment. he imagined the lion resting calmly in the sun. He imagined the elephants standing steady. The sound wasn't so bad when he stayed still.

Halfway through, the dentist came in, smiling kindly. "Well, Eli," the dentist said, "your brushing has been strong. I see one small area we'll need to watch, but no cavities today." Eli blinked, "None?" The dentist replied, "None."

He felt something swell in his chest=not relief exactly, but pride. After the fluoride treatment (which tasted "like minty bubblegum pretending to be serious," according to Eli), he slid down from the chair. "You did excellent," the hygienist said, as she handed him a sticker. "Can I take one for my sister too?" he asked. The hygienist smiled, "Of course," and handed him another sticker for his little sister, Ava.

When they walked back into the sunshine, Nana studied him carefully. "Well, Commander?" she would ask. Eli shrugged casually, but his grin gave him away. "It wasn't that bad." Nana smiled knowingly. "That's the secret."

"What's the secret this time?" he asked.

"Courage," she said. "isn't about not feeling nervous. It's about doing the brave thing while your stomach flips."

On the ride home, Eli talked more than he had on the way there. He described the chair, the tools, the counting. He explained exactly how many teeth he had and how often the dentist recommended flossing. When they pulled into the driveway, Maya rushed out first. "How many teeth?" she demanded.

"Twenty-eight so far," Eli replied importantly. Then little Ava ran up and held out her hand. "Sticker." He handed it over solemnly.

Lila examined his expression "You were brave," she concluded. Jordyn flexed again. "Strong like this?" Eli said with a grin, "Stronger."

That evening, Nana watched as Eli demonstrated proper brushing technique to his sisters and cousins. He spoke carefully, just like the dentist had.

To anyone else, it had been a simple dental appointment.

But to Nana and her growing crew-siblings and cousins, explorers all-it was another chapter in learning that bravery doesn't only live in circuses or zoo or beaches.

Sometimes, it lives in a quiet room, under a bright light, with a nine-year-old boy choosing to open his mouth and trust the helpers around him.

And Nana knew something important:

Her wild things were growing strong-not just body, but in heart.

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About the Creator

Tabatha Nabors

I'm a Christian. I love RP'ing.

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