The Knock at Room 9
How can you fear the created more than the Creator?

The first knock came just after midnight — three slow, deliberate taps against the door, patient and almost polite.
Agnes Miller opened her eyes. A thin strip of light spilled beneath the door, but the sound hadn’t come from the hallway. It was closer, as if the room itself had exhaled. She turned toward the nightstand, where her worn Bible and silver rosary rested. The beads trembled faintly, catching the moonlight that slipped through the blinds.
The nursing home was meant to be a place of rest, yet Room Nine was never quiet.
They said the room was cursed — that people assigned to it never lasted long. Patients who arrived healthy would weaken within days. Machines faltered, crosses fell from their hooks, and radios whispered static during the night. The nurses stopped discussing it aloud, but their silence said more than rumors ever could. Even the most practical ones would cross themselves before entering.
When Agnes was wheeled into Room Nine earlier that week, someone murmured, “Poor thing.” She heard it but only smiled.
She wasn’t afraid, or at least she told herself she wasn’t. Her Bible and rosary had seen her through war, childbirth, and widowhood. They were her anchor — symbols of faith that kept her tethered when the world tried to unmoor her. Still, she noticed how heavy the air felt her first night there, as though the walls themselves were holding their breath. And when she prayed, she sensed something listening that wasn’t God.
The second knock came the following night, softer this time but undeniably closer. The sound seemed to come from within the room rather than beyond the door. The rosary hanging from the bedpost began to sway, the small cross glinting in the dim light. Agnes reached for it, clutching it tightly as she whispered, “The Lord is my light and my salvation; whom shall I fear?”
Her hands trembled.
The Bible on her nightstand fluttered open on its own, the thin pages settling on Psalm 23. She began to read, her voice wavering as she reached the familiar line: “Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death…” The words comforted her, yet something in them felt less like reassurance and more like preparation.
The air grew colder. She could feel a pull — gentle but insistent — as though the rosary were being drawn toward the door. She gripped it tighter, whispering through clenched teeth, “Not tonight.”
On the third night, the knocking came from within the walls. It was steady, patient, almost rhythmic, like a heartbeat. The rosary slipped from her fingers and clattered softly onto the tile. Agnes’s breath caught. “Who are you?” she asked.
No voice answered aloud, but she felt the response rise in her chest, a voice both foreign and familiar: It is time.
Her pulse stumbled. She wanted to scream, but she couldn’t. The voice didn’t carry malice; it carried finality. Still, fear tried to take hold. “If you are not of God,” she said shakily, “you have no power here.”
The light flickered. Her Bible fell open again, this time to Luke 12:5. Her gaze fixed on the verse: “Fear Him who, after your body has been killed, has authority to throw you into hell.”
The words struck her like a revelation. This was not a warning but a reminder — that she had feared the wrong thing.
At three in the morning, the final knock came. The room had fallen utterly silent, the kind of silence that presses against your ears. The sound no longer came from the walls or the door. It came from somewhere deeper, inside her chest — a slow, fading rhythm that matched her heartbeat.
And in that moment, Agnes understood.
Death hadn’t come to claim her. God had come to call her home.
Tears welled in her eyes as she smiled faintly. “I’m ready,” she whispered. Her trembling hands rested on her Bible and rosary — her faith, her armor, her peace. “Your will be done.”
When the nurse entered at dawn, the room felt different. Still, but not cold. Peaceful.
Agnes lay motionless, the Bible open across her chest, her rosary coiled perfectly beside her hand. On the open page, something had been written in shaky handwriting, the ink smudged by tears:
Do not fear what He created. Fear the One who commands all creation.
The nurse stared at the words, her heart pounding as she thought she heard a faint knock — not from the door, but from somewhere far beyond the room.
From that day forward, no one feared Room Nine again. The knocks stopped, and those who entered found rest rather than dread.
Because sometimes, the knock you fear the most is the one that saves you.
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Carolina Borges
I've been pouring my soul onto paper and word docs since 2014
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