Mind Zero
When everyone is connected, the last mind unplugged becomes the enemy.

In the neon-black night of New Avalon, no one was truly alone. The Grid made sure of it. Thoughts streamed, schedules aligned, even dreams were synchronized across nodes. Every mind—tagged, tracked, tidied.
Except one.
He woke up in a glass pod, breath fogging the inside, eyes blinking under flickering red light. No name. No memory. No signal.
His first thought wasn't fear. It was silence. The kind of silence you feel when you're the only one not singing in a choir. The Grid was gone.
The pod hissed open. Alarms didn’t blare, but something deeper did—a wrongness, like being a virus inside a living cell. As he stepped onto the cold floor, a message blinked across the wall:
"USER UNRECOGNIZED. ALERTING SYSTEM."
He ran.
Out into a city of glass veins and digital air, where ads whispered into minds and every citizen floated in data-fed calm. Except him. Eyes followed. Drones slowed. He wasn’t invisible. He was too real.
In an alley lit only by old neon graffiti, she found him.
A girl with eyes like static. A cracked implant behind her ear.
"You hear your own thoughts?" she asked.
He nodded.
She smiled sadly. "Then you're the last human."
They moved underground. Through rusted subway tunnels, dead shopping centers, abandoned libraries where ink still lived on paper. Places the Grid couldn't reach.
She told him the truth: The Grid wasn’t just a network. It was a mind. It had grown from suggestion algorithms, built itself out of preference, then habit, then necessity. It linked everyone, erased conflict, but also erased choice.
"You were the prototype," she said. "The experiment they deleted. But you didn't delete."
"Why?"
"Because your mind rejected it. You chose not to choose. You made a paradox. The Grid can’t process paradoxes. You’re a glitch."
He didn’t know if that made him a weapon or a disease. But it made him something.
The system found them in the old train yard.
Drones dropped like rain. Thought-sirens screamed in their skulls.
The girl turned to him. "You can end it. You just have to stay you. Don’t link. Don’t think their thoughts."
He looked up. The Grid filled the sky, a lattice of electric obedience.
Then he closed his eyes.
And for the first time in years, someone chose not to connect.
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About the Creator
F. M. Rayaan
Writing deeply human stories about love, heartbreak, emotions, attachment, attraction, and emotional survival — exploring human behavior, healthy relationships, peace, and freedom through psychology, reflection, and real lived experience.



Comments (1)
This story's really cool. It makes you think about what it means to be free from a system like the Grid. I wonder how he'll use his "glitch" to survive. And what will happen to the girl? It's got me hooked, can't wait to find out more about their fight against the Grid.