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"From the Forgotten, whispers"

-From the Forgotten, whispers-

By Rajoan IslamPublished 11 months ago 4 min read

"From the Forgotten, whispers"

That night, it rained a lot, pounding against the old house's windows in a pattern that unnerved Noah. The rain outside nearly drowned out the crackling sound of the flames as he sat by the fireplace. After his father's recent job loss, his family had recently relocated to this isolated, dilapidated farmhouse in the hopes of finding calm. Noah was not so sure, though. The house felt off, with its groaning flooring and odd odors. Something that did not wish to be discovered seemed to be concealed by the walls themselves.

Lily, Noah's younger sister, was sleeping upstairs while his mother was in the kitchen unpacking. However, Noah could not get rid of the sense that he was not alone. He could feel something in the home, but he could not see anything.

The whispers started when Noah was lying in bed that night.

They were too subtle to be understood at first, like the rustle of leaves. But they became more apparent as the hours passed. The wind was not the cause. He did not imagine it. They came from somewhere deep in the house, and the whispers were real. He chose to look into it despite the knot of worry in his stomach because he was curious.

The small, dark hallway's hardwood flooring creaked under his weight. He followed the murmurs to the attic door and reached for it, almost instinctively. He discovered a rusted key in a drawer right under the locked door. The door creaked open to reveal a dusty, forgotten world, and his palm shook as he turned the key.

Old furniture, unread books, and boxes piled high in every nook and cranny of the attic. However, the murmurs had become more audible and distinct. They came from an old recliner on the far wall that had been devoured by moths. As if it had been waiting for someone, it did not belong in the attic.

With the muttering now nearly a chorus, Noah moved carefully closer. Something odd occurred when he was seated in the chair. The walls in the room around him appeared to stretch and twist, blurring. He briefly had the impression that he was being drawn into an other reality, one that was replete with ghosts and remnants of the past.

As the whispers became more distinct, Noah was able to make sense of them.

"Remember... Recall your identity... Forgotten... Forgotten..."

Then he noticed it: a dark figure that was just barely perceptible in the room's corner. It was a guy, but not really a man; rather, it was a shadow of a long-deceased person, a fading recollection.

When Noah blinked, the person was gone and he was once again in the attic. His heart thumped in his chest, and the air was heavy. He was attempting to make sense of what had just transpired, and his mind was racing. He could still hear the murmurs, but they were no longer frightening. They wanted to convey to him something significant.

Noah questioned his mother about the house's past the following day. She finally told him what she knew, although she appeared surprised by his sudden interest. Before they moved in, the house had been deserted for years; decades earlier, a family had lived there until they vanished for no apparent reason. Rumor had it that the family had been cursed and the house was haunted, but no one knew for sure what had happened to them.

The whispers reappeared that night, but they were not by themselves. Noah was all too familiar with the name of the shadows in the attic. His great-grandfather, who vanished before he was born, was the guy in the shadows. As a historian, his great-grandfather had been driven to unearth their family's lost secrets. However, he was claimed to have paid a terrible price for his studies, which had taken him down a dark path.

Noah had a flash of insight. The voices of his ancestors were trying to warn him and communicate with him, and he was hearing more than just whispers. They relied on him to complete the task they had begun and reveal the long-buried truth.

Noah started looking through old books, letters, and notebooks to learn more about his family's past since he was determined to solve the riddle. He learned that his great-grandfather had been attempting to shield his family from a curse associated with a long-lost artifact—a potent relic that had been concealed in the house for centuries—as he unearthed more.

Noah's understanding of the whispers grew as he gained more knowledge. They were the voices of the forgotten, pleading for someone to rescue them; they were more than only recollections of the past.

Weeks passed, and Noah followed the hints his great-grandfather had left behind. He eventually located the artifact, an old silver locket, concealed under the attic floorboards in the darkest section of the home. The whispering stopped the moment his fingers touched it. The shadows that had troubled him vanished as the air became calm.

That is when Noah realized. The murmurs had served as a warning and an appeal for forgiveness. Additionally, he had lifted the curse that had plagued his family for many generations by discovering the locket.

A burden was lifted from Noah's shoulders as he came downstairs from the attic, and the house no longer felt stuffy and chilly. The first rays of light peaked through the clouds, and the storm outside had ceased. He was more than just a young man living in an old house; he was the guardian of his family's heritage and the one who had brought the past and present back into harmony.

Noah could have sworn he heard a last murmur, a small, appreciative sigh, as he turned to face the attic before it vanished into the morning silence.

The conclusion.

-I hope the spooky story was enjoyable! If you require any changes or another story, please let me know. Thank You.-

AdventureFan FictionFantasyHistoricalPsychologicalScriptShort StorythrillerYoung Adult

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Rajoan Islam

Hey, Life is very beautiful, you have to enjoy it while it lasts.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 11 months ago

    such great descriptions! Wonderful work! The rustling of the leaves chilled me to the bone! 🥰

  • Nice work ! What was your trigger for writing this ? 🏆

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