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11:11

A Story About Wishes That Cost Too Much

By Lydia martinezPublished about 2 hours ago 4 min read
When 11:11 stops feeling like a wish...

The first time Elena noticed the time, she didn't think anything of it. She was washing dishes, her hands numb from the cold water, when she glanced at the microwave and saw the numbers glowing: 11:11. A minute later, she had already forgotten about it.

But the next day it happened again. And the next. And the next.

It didn't matter what she was doing -folding laundry, checking homework, hunting for grocery deals, arguing with overdue bills. Every time she looked at the clock, it was 11:11.

At first she took it a coincidence. Then as some kind of cosmic joke. Later, as a sign.

It was on a particularly difficult night -when the fridge was nearly empty and her daughter asked if they could order pizza "like other families" -that Elena, without thinking, whispered a wish to the glowing numbers on her phone:

"Let money come. A lot of money. Please."

She didn't say it with hope. She said it with exhaustion. The kind of exhaustion that settles in the bones, not the skin.

The next morning, she found an envelope in the mailbox. No return address. Inside were $40. Crumpled bills, as if they had passed through too many hands.

Elena laughed. A short, disbelieving laugh. It couldn't be because of the wish. It couldn't.

But that night, when she looked at the clock again without meaning to, it was 11:11. And again she wished for money. This time with a little less shame.

"Just enough for this week"

Three days later, the bank emailed her: A refund for a purchase she didn't remember making. $126.47.

Elena felt a shiver. Not fear. Something closer to... recognition.

As if the ritual had been waiting for her.

As the weeks passed, the pattern became impossible to ignore.

Every time she saw 11:11, something happened.

An extra client at her cleaning job who tipped generously. A coupon that appeared in her inbox exactly whe she needed it. A folded bill in the pocked of on an old coat. A delayed payment that suddenly processed.

Nothing supernatural. Nothing impossible. But everything... timely.

Too timely.

Elena began to feel a mix of relief and guilt. As if she were stealing something without knowing from whom.

But every time she tried to ignore the hour, the clock found her anyway.

One night, while helping her son with a school project, he asked:

"Mom, why do you always look at the clock at the same time?"

Elena froze.

She didn't know he had noticed.

"At what time?" she asked, trying to sound casual.

"Eleven eleven," he said without looking up. "You always say 'ugh,again."

Elena felt her throat tighten.

She didn't remember saying that out loud.

The ritual began to change her.

She slept less. Ate less. Thought more.

Every night she waited -tough she wouldn't admit it- for the moment when, without meaning to, her eyes would find the glowing numbers.

Sometimes she tried to avoid it. She hid her phone in a drawer. Unplugged the microwave clock. Closed her eyes when down the hallway.

But it still happened.

Once, she woke up in the middle of the night with her heart racing. She looked at the bedside clock.

11:11

It couldn't be. It made no sense. She had fallen asleep at nine.

That was the moment she began to feel afraid.

Not of the ritual. Not of the hour.

Of herself.

Of what she was willing to believe.

The money kept coming, but in increasingly... uncomfortable ways.

A neighbor lost her wallet. Elena found it on the grass, with $80 inside. The neighbor said she didn't remember carrying that much.

A coworker suddenly quit, and Elena was offered more hours. Hours he had been begging for.

A distant uncle died and left a small amount to be divided among the cousins. Elena didn't remember speaking to him in years.

Nothing was impossible. Nothing was magical.

But everything tasted bitter.

As if the money didn't arrive... but shifted.

As if someone lost so she could gain.

One night, while cooking rice for dinner, she felt something inside her crack.

Not a bone. Not a thought.

Something deeper.

She looked at the microwave clock.

11:11.

Not even a minute had passed since the last time she'd seen it.

I couldn't be real. It couldn't.

Elena dropped the spoon. The rice began to burn. The smell filled the kitchen.

"Enough," she whispered. "Enough."

But her eyes couldn't leave the numbers.

If was as if were waiting.

As if it wanted something.

Elena felt an irrational, almost childish urge to make the wish.

But she didn't.

For the first time in months, she didn't.

And the silence that followed was so heavy it nearly knocked her down.

The days that followed were strange.

She didn't see the hour. Not once.

She didn't see the hour. Not once.

She didn't find money. No refunds. No tips. No coincidences.

Everything returned to normal.

A harsh normal. A painful normal.

But also a normal that made her feel... free.

Until one night, while folding laundry, her daughter ran into the room.

"Mom, look," she said, holding out her phone. "It turned on by itself."

Elena took the phone.

The screen was lit.

The clock read:

11:11.

Her daughter smiled, innocent.

"Make a wish, Mommy."

Elena felt a tremor run through her body.

She didn't know if it was fear. Or relief. Or resignation.

She looked at the glowing numbers. Felt the weight of all the previous wishes. Felt the echo of every time she had asked for money without thinking of the cost.

And then, very slowly, she closed her eyes.

She didn't ask for money. She didn't ask for anything material.

She simply said:

"Let this end."

When she opened her eyes the screen was black.

The clock off.

Her daughter was no longer in the room.

Elena stood alone, laundry half-folded, heart racing, a strange feeling in her chest.

She didn't know if the ritual had ended. She didn't know if she had broken it. She didn't know if she had caused it.

She only knew one thing:

The next morning, when she looked at the clock for the first time, a shiver ran down her spine.

It read 11:10.

And for the first time in a long time, Elena didn't know whether to feel relieved... or disappointed.

familyMysteryPsychologicalShort Story

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Lydia martinez

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