A concoction of short stories, thrown together to convince entire generations of the impossible and implausible. Abused, to justify the suppression of minorities and throw shame on the innocent, it remains a leading world power despite unimaginable suffering, world hunger and war. Yet they still pray. I remain dumbfounded.
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Author's Note: I do not intend to cause offence with this critique. I know that The Bible is used as a source of comfort and love by many, and I wholeheartedly respect that. This is simply a critique; my personal opinion.
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About the Creator
Sian N. Clutton
A horror and thriller writer at heart, who's recently decided to take a stab at other genres.
I sincerely hope you find something that either touches your soul or scares your socks off.
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Definitely a unique critique which feels authentic ❤️✨
Couldn't agree more good piece 👏 😅
I love it, I hope this piece places. 😁
Lol, I loved this! I wish I can be more like you, so bold with your opinions!
Unique
Accurate.