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Where the Eye Becomes a Universe.

When an eye becomes more than vision—when it becomes a soul.

By Sayeba khanPublished 2 months ago 4 min read
Some eyes hold storms; some hold galaxies.

There is an entire world breathing inside a single eye,

a quiet cosmos suspended between shadow and light,

where colors melt like forgotten sunsets

and reflections whisper the names of things

that were loved once,

and lost twice.

The eye stares outward, yet it holds more than sight—

it carries storms,

gentle ones and violent ones,

the kind that don’t break the sky

but break the person holding them.

Its iris burns in fragments of green and amber,

a mosaic of seasons trapped in a circle no wider than a coin,

yet deep enough to drown a lifetime.

Around it, lines curl like smoke rising from a hidden fire,

sharp, fluid, chaotic, tender.

Each swirl seems to reach for something,

like memories trying to pull themselves back into form—

moments once solid, now reduced

to delicate strokes of ink and emotion.

They stretch outward like branches that grew too quickly,

like thoughts that outran the heart,

like dreams that refused to stay asleep.

The lashes curve in dark, dramatic arcs,

thick like midnight forests

where secrets learn to walk without feet.

They cast shadows that fall gently

yet carry the weight of years,

the weight of every quiet ache

that never found the courage to speak aloud.

They flutter like the last defense

between what the world sees

and what the soul remembers.

Within the eye itself, a glint—

soft, golden, trembling—

like a candle flame trying to survive

in a room where the windows never fully close.

It wavers,

not because it is weak,

but because it feels.

The light inside that eye is ancient.

Older than the lines that surround it.

Older than the face that carries it.

It is the light of someone who has learned

that beauty is not always gentle,

and truth is not always soft.

Sometimes beauty arrives as chaos.

Sometimes truth arrives as a trembling glow

in a place that should have gone dark long ago

but chose not to.

This eye does not simply look—

it remembers.

It remembers the laughter of mornings

that smelled like warm tea and possibility,

when the world was small enough

to fit in the palms of two hopeful hands.

It remembers afternoons

when the sky cracked open

and poured rain that tasted like forgiveness.

It remembers nights spent tracing constellations

in the silence between heartbeats,

nights when loneliness felt almost holy.

It remembers people too—

those who entered softly,

like wind brushing past curtains,

and those who left loudly,

like doors breaking off their hinges.

Their shadows still ripple

in the golden center of the iris,

flickering like ghosts made of warmth

instead of sorrow.

Around the eye, the swirling lines

seem to dance between presence and disappearance.

They twist like the threads of thoughts

that never quite settle.

They move with the gentleness of sighs

and the ferocity of unspoken truths,

braiding chaos and calm

into a single unbreakable storm.

If you stare long enough,

you can almost imagine those lines breathing,

like the soul beneath the skin is exhaling its history

in patterns too precise to be accidental.

They stretch outward,

fragile yet alive,

like the roots of something searching

for a place

to finally belong.

And perhaps that is what this eye is—

a place searching for stillness

but learning to thrive in motion.

A fragment of a story

that refuses to stay silent

even when the world demands otherwise.

Inside its gaze,

you can feel the quiet bravery of someone

who has walked through their own storms

and did not drown.

Someone who learned that survival

does not always sound like victory—

sometimes it sounds like breath,

steady and soft.

Sometimes it sounds like eyelashes

meeting the air

after a long night of unshed tears.

The swirling curls that surround the eye

could be wind,

could be thought,

could be the wildness of a spirit

that refuses to be domesticated.

They rise in dark spirals,

sharp yet elegant,

like the handwriting of a poet

who never learned to write neatly

because their emotions always moved too fast.

And that, too, is beauty.

The eye becomes a mirror

not for the world

but for the parts of ourselves

we don’t show often enough.

The fragile pieces,

the burning pieces,

the pieces that feel too much and too deeply

for a world that moves too quickly

to notice.

This eye notices everything.

It holds the shimmer of hope

that refuses to extinguish.

It holds the remnants of heartbreak

that shaped the person behind it.

It holds the resilience of someone

who learned to keep going

even when every step felt like holding fire

in bare hands.

There is softness in that fire.

There is tenderness in the chaos.

There is poetry in the way the lashes fall

like ink strokes on the edge of a dream.

There is truth in the way the iris glows

as if it learned to make its own light

when the world refused to offer any.

This is not just an eye.

It is an atlas of emotions—

a map drawn in curves and colors,

lines and shadows,

gold and green.

A map of a soul that has seen more

than it ever admits,

yet carries it all

with a strange and quiet grace.

And in that stillness,

in that fragile glow,

in that swirling chaos—

the universe finds its reflection.

Because sometimes the smallest part of us

contains the infinite.

Sometimes a single glance

can hold a thousand unspoken stories,

waiting to be read

by someone patient enough

to look long enough

to really see.

History

About the Creator

Sayeba khan

Writing my soul, one poem at a time.✍️🕊️

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